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Click hereWho knew? Maybe she'd drop the yakuza dude and get with him. He'd been a bit lonely since he got rid of Lola. He didn't like spending time in the house alone and he didn't like whores near his things.
That was one thing he missed, Linda knew how to deal with his temper. Yeah, she knew how to dodge a hit. Linda was a decent wife and a good lay. Maybe he shouldn't have gotten rid of her. Linda.... LINDA. THAT BITCH WAS LINDA!
He stared incredulously as she bowed and played the Japanese girl routine. He'd cremated her but that woman wasn't Linda. He should have known. Something was off with that body but he was so happy to get rid of her, especially after that debacle of an execution that Lola fucked up.
It all made sense now. The only way the Yakuza could get his money so fast was because they had an inside source. She must have run to them after she got shot. Maybe she was working for them the whole time.
He wiped his mouth in annoyance and made a signal for his men to move in but the sounds of swishing and clicking filled the room. There was a gun to every one of his men's heads. He looked around confused as a figure moved toward him. Hana pulled out a chair and sat a foot from him.
"You're very predictable."
"Linda, what the fuck? You're alive? You faked your fucking death? You fucking bi-"
She cut him off with a quick rush and elbow strike across his jaw before gracefully sitting back down. An attendant handed her a towel to wipe the blood from her sleeve. "Hana. My name is Kuro Hana."
Martin stared at her, shocked and holding his jaw. His lip bled onto the lapel of his bright red suit making darkening drops. This wasn't the quiet Linda who ran from him. "Fuck you mean?"
She sighed and made a short sweeping movement with her hand and the surrounding people seemed to stand and fade to the edges of the room. "At one point, I wanted this to be slow. I wanted you to suffer and ache but that would take a passion for you which I just seem to be short of." She stood and another attendant brought her .22 on a ceramic platter.
"Linda? Linda, think about what you're d-"
She shot twice into his forehead and sighed at the splatter on her kimono. She'd liked it very much but now it was done for. Placing the gun back on the platter, she turned from the body. She could hear attendants moving and cleaning it as she walked back to her family at the front of the room.
"To whoever came with the man that was, you may leave here alive, join with us, or die at his side. I know he beat you, tortured you but we are not him. Choose wisely." She turned around and watched as some left through the front door and the rest stayed but nobody choosing to die for him.
Hana gracefully sat in the traditional way before Boss Fakui. She bowed and sat up, hands in her lap. "These men, I give to you, what is left of Martin Cole's fortune."
The boss nodded at her and waved his hand over the men. "I accept your gifts and your role in this family, Kuro Hana."
The crowd applauded.
- COMMENTS
atropisabout 9 years agoI really love the story but somethings been off for me and i have been trying to figure out what it is.....its the fact that the main lead female is not fully developed. She responds and does stuff but you don't really know her. Not enough thoughts and motives. I felt like she was a walking zombie (emotionally), lack of depth in the characters. There were instances but not enough in my humble opinion. However the story, plot, flow etc... was really really good.
Kill bill meets.... Jackie brown
I really was more interested in the part of her getting a new family and the training more than the main romance point of the story ( great writing to be able to do that).
Having no family, then having family and going from abuse to love are all very emotional situations that require deeper info. About characters then just knowing their actions.
These are just my opinions, no offense
I really do like the story
Great job
ihartekennyover 9 years agoI wanna be like Hana when I grow up. Lol. Good work, I think the way Hana handled that was absolute perfection! It was so cold, the way its supposed to be can't wait for the last installment.
beautifulreaderover 9 years agoI am so sad that it is almost over. Your idea and plot definitely could have been a 10 chapter story. I feel like I'm missing out on some character depth it all happened so fast. But all in all, great story and I hope you write longer ones in the future :)
Cherrypeachover 9 years agoRed suit and gold shoes= tacky psychopath. Lol I love your writing style, plot, characterizations, settings, hell everything! Great ending to Martin; Linda is dead and buried and Hana is truly a queen. Bravo!! Excellent read.
