All Comments on 'Black Market Bidder Ch. 04'

Nice to see her try and escape so let’s see what devilment he can come up with and not destroy her fire.

The car btw is a Rolls Royce xx

I very much appreciate the longer chapter and its well written, has a lot of potential to became more hotter & longer, but I think the main characters and plot are lucking a certain level of realism.I don't think that any abduction victim would engage in friendly talk and behaving as a guest with the person who "bought" her or be friendly with the people who help her "owner" to keep her captive.And above all, when there is a chance to escape instead of try to find a policeman or scream "help" in a mall full of peaple, she simple try to return home with a unknown trucker.Hope in the next chapter you correct these loophols and make the plot more realistic.Regardless, I'll defintely keep reading if you keep writing (:

My wife read the story so far and said ... trash.

She looked at me and was very serious:

I would look at this some of a bitch and say "I will kill you, you will kill me, or I will kill myself, it does not matter but I will be free of you." I know she would do exactly that, including burning the building down around her or cut her own wrists but she would never submit to him.

I'm loving this series, please keep them coming (asap)!

I very much agree with the comment regarding realism an with the anonymous' wife. She needs to consistently stand up for her freedom and he needs to be put into his place as the evil that he is...

great story, great writing!

I cant wait to see whats in store for them!

Super hot so far 10/10

Since this in fiction I am okay bending reality. I specially have enjoyed reading something different not the run of the mill he bought her he abused her and raped her and she loved it. Seems that Aiden needs to learn not to trust anyone related to Leon. Even if it was unrealistic for him to expect her to not try to leave.

I usually write down the titles/authors of stories i am really into, but i forgot to with this story and i have been so sad bc i really loved it! Well obviously i just found it & another chapter is posted! (im going to read it now). i have been scrolling & scrolling and FINALLY found this again!

Anywayysss excuse me while i re-read the chapters (its been a while) and catch back up on our sexy couple!