All Comments on 'Black Owned Blonde Attorney Ch. 01'

the first chapter was great, but i want 2 read more, thank you

rate this submission without at least one more chapter, probably more than one more chapter. Chapter one seems to have been done with some care, nicely organized and easy to read, but the ostensible reason for its having been written (the attorney's trip into Black servitude) is not touched upon or even hinted at. This reader will be looking and reading for the next submission.....Please make it longer than this one.

nice start looking forward to chapter two

love the story...and read your bio. I too love black but it's pussy in my case. It all started in College. But if my wife found out she would leave me. I don't look at people from the outside just the inside...so keep up the good work love to read more

Strong set-up and context; the background is there, but we now await what you will paint on it. Continue as you begun and you will make my favorites.

The writing is good. I hope we don't have to wait too long ch 2, and that's it's longer.

thanks for writing!

Looks like you went ahead to get your explanation out in this first chapter, so it would seem you may be getting into the story of why you are black owned. If its your thing, then all i can say at least you are open about it unlike people who hide their desires.

Write longer chapters - this was a barely an introduction.

sometimes i think i am black owned , buth then i come back hone and there is my husband and 2 sons

all white , and i found i just use black men for my pleasure

Only a deranged person lacking in humanity would consider this erotic or entertaining.<P>

A true story of this baseness is valueless except to those without any future in life's realities.<P>

A sadly sick writer who needs help.

That was lame! Why did it end so abruptly?!

Sorry highly disappointed. great title but it's a lead on. I wanted to get something

Don't be discouraged by other's comments. You've got a story to tell and should tell it in all the detail you can. First person would be nice, as you could tell your inner feelings. Spell and grammar check to make the story flows properly and that the reader doesn't get hung up. You've got a nice start here, and I for one look forward to your future postings.

Stupid is just as stupid, whatever emphasis on the race, creed, color or nationality

Did i miss something? I was under the impression these where supposed to be sex stories. Where was the sex? I give this piece of crap a -5 star rating.

This was a promising start, but just a start. So sorry you didn't write more.

Not at all interesting

A promising start but it needs many more parts.......

Where is the rest of the story? It starts out quite positive.