All Comments on 'Black Renter Takes My Bed and Wife'

Great story. I hope you write a part 2 9or another story similar.

Wouldn't an adult male decide he would want to bring the issue to a head (pun intended)? He only hopes someday to get his wife back? Seriously.

See, when you claim the main character is VERY intelligent you have to make him sound that way. This guy doesn't. In fact, no one does in this dumb story that badly needs proofreading and a rewrite.

... a story for all those dumb cock suckers outside there.

Good story. However if it was me one of would be leaving probably me.

You hit some very good themes but your ideas need to be fleshed out. Build up the inner struggle and the temptation. Make it a slow burn and build up to a reveal. Put a little more work into it and you'll have a fantastic story.

And if she treats her husband like that then she doesnt love him. Not even a little bit so why would she want him back? Not not just get a divorce?

Appreciate that you wanted to write the usual interracial bullshit but at least make it plausible.

I thought the story flowed well, but there were several mistakes. An Editor would have been a good choice for you to proof read your story.

I also think the use of quotation marks would have made fora better read. 4*

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More like how cliche.No vote .Cut and paste IR cuck drivel.

nothing to add to title

I did like the theme, but anyone reading my works will realize that. What I was disappointed in was the lack of development. There was no real conflict, no dealing with emotions of the lies, betrayal or the tragedy of the marriage.

The black male had some nice description, but the husband and wife need more fleshing out. I'm not talking physical descriptions, those are well-laid, but the personalities and what makes them tick.

The wife's so-willing ease to toss aside their marriage to take on a new "pretend husband" is a bit much for a single romp, or even a few of them. It may be lust, it may be infatuation, but unless the marriage was already doomed, which wasn't laid out, then it is a bit far-fetched. In short, the story lacked some credibility.

A nice start, but could use a lot of character development, which would lead to conflict, and then see where the characters go.

A good pace, and easy read, but the story just isn't ready yet. Keep trying! :)

Your not a man....and your story sucked!!

no man would stay married in that situation.. I get the sexual aspects but I would have given her divorce papers and moved on

I want to hear about swallowing his cum direct from 13”.

You get a *1 because their are no negatives. Stupid story about a "Loving wife" who goes apeshit because she sees a big dick. By the way, the story implies the renter fell in an upstairs bathroom but was unhurt SO WHY was he still laying on the floor when dumby and his wifee arrive? Isn't the bathroom door closed. Stupid situation. Also what kind of an idiot selects a guy less than 3 months divorced over a nurse as a renter. The idea that the nurse was too talkative was lame. Plus the story heeded editing! It was painful to read! Just a dumb poorly written excuse to have a cuckold eat another guy's cum and suck dick.

more like howwishfulthinking. I didn't know they let inmates post to porn sites. You sound like a scared little black man writing from the slam, where you are white-owned. Keep your fantasies going, kid, but you need to take a little more time with your character development.

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There Is No Way I Would Stay Married To A Slut Like That!....Total Dispespect For Their Marriage Let Alone Her Husband!

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A weekend for a loyal wife to cuckold you? Ridiculous! Black man would have been beaten and thrown out with a warning to leave town by sundown. If he big and during and whatever bullshit, you'd call some friends to help.

Although there were some glaring grammar errors (hence only 4/5), it was a fun, quick, interracial cuckold story, and I enjoyed it.

You might be able to shoo away those unlikely to enjoy such a story with some short disclaimer at the beginning like, "If you don't like cuckold stories, this one isn't for you," or something like that. Then, if they still complain in the comments, you can at least reply, "Don't like it? Don't read it."

My wife took a much younger black lover (19)and I was left jacking off and sucking his cum from her. I too suck his cock for him so he gets hard and can fuck my/his wife. Mary also likes me to suck him off at breakfast she said I need to start my day with a full belly.

pięknie rucha dojrzały murzyn [ 47 lat ] swoim czarnym jak smoła i grubym penisem.On naruchał nam na razie dwójkę psotnych chłopaków ale to na pewno nie koniec.Szczęśliwa liczba mojej żony - to siódemka i tylu murzynków chce urodzić.Tu,gdzie mieszkamy,każde białe małżeństwo wychowuje po kilkoro czarnych dzieci - żadna nowość i trzy lata temu też do nich dołączyliśmy.Teraz murzyn rucha moją żonę kilka razy dziennie aby znów ja powalić na trzecią ciążę a ja uwielbiam moja żonę w czarnej ciąży.Liżę jej pięknie zmaltretowaną cipkę przez murzyńskiego chuja po każdym stosunku i delektuję się eliksirem naruchanym z jego wielkiego grzyba,który tryska silnymi gęstymi strumieniami do macicy mojej ślubnej i oby jak najdłużej to trwało.

My wife and I decided to let her date black men as long as I could stay involved and know all. She sometimes goes out and comes back in the morning full of cum, or she brings a black man home so I can watch and jack off from the bedroom doorway. If I'm really lucky I can fluff his cock before they get started, or cum on her as they're fucking, or lick them both clean.

Wake Up Dude, She dumped your ass for the BBC. Divorce her ass and find a new woman just for you. She doesnt love you if she treats the BBC better than you and won't give you sex anymore. Time to go. Many more women out there. 5 stars cuz you don't have to be a cuckhold.

all i can say is this- i would be doing life without parole because i would have gotten life for two homicides his then saving the whore wife for last and i would make sure she would regret she was ever born. have you ever heard of going up in smoke.

Just super hot!

You take in a total stranger as a boarder, leave him alone in your home with your hot young wife while you go out of town. And you’re surprised that he’s been fucking her when you return home? And you expect us to believe that really happened?

I would have given your story 3 or 4 stars if you had spent a good portion of it, describing in great detail, what occurred between the wife and Mark when hubby was out of town.

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