All Comments on 'Black Velvet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Needs more visualization

I would have liked a more detailed description of both women's appearances and more details about the love making they did

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow!

Doesn’t need anything. Perfect and captivating just as it is.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very nice and well written. Only wish it had gone on longer. Hope you revisit it oneday.

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