All Comments on 'Black Velvet'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very nice and well written. Only wish it had gone on longer. Hope you revisit it oneday.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow!

Doesn’t need anything. Perfect and captivating just as it is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Needs more visualization

I would have liked a more detailed description of both women's appearances and more details about the love making they did

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