All Comments on 'Blackmailed'

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CSKCSKalmost 9 years ago
love it

Love everything about it. On to the next chapter!!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 9 years ago
Oh, yeah.

I loved the story-line and the story telling.

The only suggestion is to go ahead and write out the dialogue. You tell us what they each say, but narrating that makes it seem a bit less like it's really happening.

Please keep writing.

Thanks.

sober71sober71almost 9 years ago
Hot

Off to chapter 2. Keep it cumming

albertrobertalbertrobertover 8 years ago
Great story

Would have love to have gone through a similar experience at that age. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Enjoyed it

I like stories where the guy blackmailed becomes a willing slut. Just goes to show you that it wasn't blackmail. It was something that you needed and likely needed over and over and over.

davedingy1701davedingy1701over 6 years ago
Great Story

Great story, well paced and not lacking in action. Thanks for sharing.

jamtbyjamtbyover 4 years ago
A fantasy well written

Your story is well written and captures an unfulfilled fantasy of mine.

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