by hasnoalias
Your story is well written and captures an unfulfilled fantasy of mine.
Great story, well paced and not lacking in action. Thanks for sharing.
I like stories where the guy blackmailed becomes a willing slut. Just goes to show you that it wasn't blackmail. It was something that you needed and likely needed over and over and over.
Would have love to have gone through a similar experience at that age. Wow!
I loved the story-line and the story telling.
The only suggestion is to go ahead and write out the dialogue. You tell us what they each say, but narrating that makes it seem a bit less like it's really happening.
Please keep writing.
Thanks.