All Comments on 'Blackmailed at First Ch. 05'

another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.

After putting down a great classic piece of literature, it normally follows that the reader stops to realize and appreciate the creativity and skill of the author. What a wonderful creation of mind and heart.

But as this story series illustrates, there is a very different response to decrepit dehumanizing writing. We don't focus on the unbelievable bizarre caricatures, but have to wonder what sort of mind wants to expose himself, or is so dense and numb that he cannot appreciate his own embarrassment and humiliation.

I think the intent could be legitimate, but the execution and details are just too convoluted and contradictory to be taken seriously. Like a 2-year old's scribbling in a coloring book, it may be done with paper and color, but it is not art, only wasted effort. There is a reason most artist's work is never seen because they destroy it, acknowledging their own failed efforts. You might take a lesson from their honest self editing.

The story makes more sense after reading this chapter.

My favorite totally over the top, off the wall, and down in the gutter author.

No hod for making man would never take her back. You make this guy look like a bigger fool after all...

I like this story. It is a great fantasy, not necessarily great literature. Readers who object to the story ignore the fact that the author gets to set the rules, and so long as he follows them it is easy to suspend disbelief.

Stupid. Just blame it on everybody else. Narcissistic and inane. The writer here must have some mental issues, or something deeper. Probably at the root of it all, a really twisted and ugly heart.