All Comments on 'Blackmailed Ch. 02'

you write very well from a boys point of view.....I will keep an eye out for your next part *grins*

I sort of agree that you do write very well from a male point of view, though most of the torture and kink is coming from Gina. So I'd say you know how you would humiliate and torture a male. I didn't say a Man because clearly this guy isn't one.

4 stars

When Gina finally does let him come .. why not shoot his pent up load in her pussy and then while he is tied laying on his back .. gina sit on his mouth and force him to clean up her cum filled pussy.

Awe, when it was shower time I was expecting him to receive a Golden Shower.

It's about time to introduce Creampie training ... don't you agree? Or maybe try the Toilet Slave holding a funnel in his mouth and proceding to pee in it or fill a champagne glass with Gina's natural champagne pee and have him drink it.

Very good start, please add a few more chapters.

I hate when people (men and women do this) refuse to accept responsibility for their fantasies. You had to make yourself blameless by having the woman rape you. Ridiculous premise for a story. Gave it a "3" because your writing was good.