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1Penny4My2Cents1Penny4My2Centsover 10 years ago
Good Build Up

Very intriguing concept for an erotic story! If you follow up, I hope to read it & find it more satisfying! Anticipation can bring greater fulfillment, but without a climax is just frustrating!

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