All Comments on 'Blindfolded Fun'

Like sinenjur you will write craps.

Loved your story. Keep sharing your experiences. Let the uptight assholes go play with themselves to someone else's writing if they don't like yours.

in the end they enjoyed it together. 4 stars

Unless you really have one of these, I recommend using comas.

:D

"This really happened" ... the ultimate fantasy.

Just write up the fantasies, they're good enough for a fiction site like this one. The prologue about it all being true may do it for some people, but is mostly irrelevant.

Too many comas. Broken sentences. Good story though.

For now, I'll stick too reporting my experiences.

Allso, too many comma's..... dude, do you have any idea how hard it is to write a story in an onther language?

Leuk verhaal en je Engels is ook goed. Ga zo door!