by dusty_gurly
little tale of the delights of power and submission. Tastefully written. Well done
What a lucky person you are to be able to write so explicitly and make everything so beautiful. Would love to read more.
and devotion in your words.....this is one lucky dom! as are the readers of your story.
An exquisite portrayal of a sub's feelings with her loving master. A pleasure to read.
Since this feels like the first chapter of something more, I'll treat it as such.
Nicely written and the flow of the story is clear and understandable.
Look forward to more.
A very special and hot tale of true devotion. Excellent! Keep it up!