by Masters_Phoenix
That was an inspiring story. Very awesome, with a tinge of Dominance/submission. Loved it, can't wait for more. Thank you!
This story had all the contents of what should have been very erotic. But the construction of the beginning left a lot to be desired. For instance.....you tell of him arranging the blanket in front of the fire, and then the next thing the reader sees is her in bed, wondering how she got there. There was no description of him taking her into the house, laying her on the blanket in front of the fire, undressing her, etc. That lack of description ruined the whole story.
This story was great! The wonderful writing combined with the fact that something like this could very well happen to someone (hopefully ME!) made it a very heartfelt and moving story. I hope the author chooes to write other stories like it!
Snow...fire = romance!! :) I thought the story was great! Please continue to write!