by Maximum_ride89
I loved this second part, but you cannot gloss over Hector taking her anal virginity like that, man!
You gotta show us how that went for the next part.
I like how the bully is breaking her will, slowly but surely. By making her say things like "I love you" repeatedly, his punish/reward system based on her compliancy, and even his misogynistic attitude are all leaving subconscious imprints in her mind.
It would be great to see her transition from loving mother and begin to adopt some of the bully's attitude toward her son the more he manipulates/changes her.
It would be the ultimate NC story if Hector is able to pervert that strong bond between mother and son, and make it so the she becomes repulsed by her own kid's weaknesses. It would be even more wicked if Hector makes her pregnant with a new son for her to replace Nick. Hectors seed would be stronger and Jessica will love his kid more because he is the better male.
Good luck! I hope you continue this series for a while. 5 STARS
If she doesn't get on the pill she's stupid as he is. Lower back tattoos don't lie. If she's standing there with a frying pan of hot grease and doesn't burn him she has already given up. Stupid kind of ruins the story for me. So a stupid girl gets humiliated. So what?
Of course we need at least one looooong chapter. I'd like to see the boyfriend find out about the two of them, then Hector forces him to stay. Hector fucks her in front of the boyfriend and, then, her son. Or.......?
The best; Seems to capture how a milf gets taken in by a younger bully and submits bit by bit.
Hope more are written in this series; so many options!