All Comments on 'Blood Moon: Malachi's Story Ch. 03'
by secretlover222
- 32 Comments
donaldeabout 13 years agowas a great update to your story i can not wait for the next chapter
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI have been checking in for an update every few days, and am so Glad that you Finally updated. I positivly adore your stories. Can not Wait to read more .
cantfightfateabout 13 years agoAnd the chapters are too short when we get them. I am enjoying the story a lot, which makes the waiting so frustrating. If the chapters were a bit longer, I could handle a long wait. But the anticipation builds and builds- then there's only one page. It's a bit disappointing.
Despite my complaints, I know life can get busy. I am happy to see the continuation of the story. I would be ecstatic if the updates were longer and more frequent. Thanks for writing.
willieoneabout 13 years agodisappointed with Malachi he is/was my favorite character and thought him such a compassionate leader, but the way he is treating her is really pissing me of with his idea of throwing her away when he she is of no further use to him. It was a total turn of!! I hope he gets over his lust for his sister in law and finds himself in love with his wife SOON!
After waiting for months you only give us one page what a let down and now we have another long wait for more!!
katgoddess1almost 13 years agoWow, he has certainly changed from the compassionate brother and ruler he seemed before. It seems odd that he would encourage her to keep her head high as a Queen, but then act indifferent, even coldly toward her. The nights will be long and lonely if he keeps this up!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agojust read through the entire series and I know that sometimes your proof-reading skills aren't so good but the stor is and I hope that the next installment comes soon.
Najmaover 12 years agoI love the curve ball you are throwing with the King. I can clearly see why he would be so compassionate and giving to the other women but fight tooth and nail against his own "falling." It is clear to me. I saw write more this is a great series. Although i would take a week after done to reread it before posting some of your genders were mixed in several places. This will also help with the spelling issues as spell check fixes misspelled words but not words that are misplaced
Anonymousover 12 years agoPlease update more soon!! I've been waiting! haha... Can't wait for the chapter!!
Anonymousover 12 years agoOk i understand how some people just write and stop but you really need to continue im hooked into the story I really hope you will finish :)
blkwlf65over 12 years agoThis series is awesome! Please continue! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI was hoping that you would finish Malachi's story. I'm sure I speak for all of your reader that we would really like to read this last chapter in your story. Thank you...
shortydeealmost 12 years agoThat can not be all that you are writing. You have to finish this story real soon.
vivavixenover 11 years agoI think this is your best chapter yet, and this pairing does the most to show off the great world you've created.
wolfgirl08over 11 years agoplease continue.. this story is absolutely amazing. please post soon :)
Peta82over 11 years agoPlease finished this story as it would be a great waste if u don't
willieonealmost 11 years agoEvery story in the similar story list is another unfinished tale...Following the Feeling,Feral,Alpha Protection and The Prife of a Slave all great stories and like yours all incomplete. It is all so sad when great stories are abandoned!!
Anonymousover 10 years agoI love all your stories, they're amazing!! I really want you to finish this and write new ones!!!!!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoIt's been awhile since you have updated Malachi's story, please come back and finish it.
Anonymousover 9 years agoPlease finish malachi's story. Your writing is exceptional, love all the stories, keep up the good work.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoTried to make this one five stars also but hit the fourth star by accident. This is an excellent story also. Please keep writing.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis is the second time I've read this story, hoping for more... Malachi deserves a great hot sensual love scene and a 'happily ever after'. Besides, there are more brothers and sisters waiting in the wings for their chance to find their mates and have mind blowing sex. Please don't give up. Looking forward to the next chapter...
