All Comments on 'Blown Away Ch. 02'

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Anonymousabout 10 years ago

4/5

Pretty damn good. Just one minor thing.

Get an editor. There were some mistakes throughout, even a point where a paragraph was almost entirely entered twice.

burnrnrod2 about 10 years ago

more than pretty dam good can not wait for more chapters

Anonymousover 6 years ago

DAMN

Even though Tay's trail been in the news u always wonder if this ever happens. Carrie & Taylor are so hot & man I hope there is a sexual.

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