All Comments on 'Boating in the San Juans Ch. 07'

by DaddyO Wil

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Friskee_cplFriskee_cplabout 20 years ago
Fan bloody tastic

Now this is a great story. No pretences about literature just pure cock hardening and pussy wetting sex. The scenes are varied and thankfully not overlong.

Bring on the rest.

IgorovichIgorovichabout 20 years ago
Well Done

Wil: So far I have read most of yuor stories, at least 3-7. I have enjoyed them very much. I used to have a lady friend who would have loved to be on this cruise. She is very sexual and enjoys parties very much, as well as being very bi. I could her and I taking full part in all these adventures.

Only criticism is that the proofing leaves a little, just a little to be desired. Several misspellings which momentarily leave the reader wondering what you were trying to say. Also, there are a few phrasings which do the same. BUt, since I am reading this for the ertoica, I do not believe this is a big deterrent from enjoyment. Anxiously awaiting more.

Igor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
nigger cock

I knew before it was over she would have to get some nigger cock

Bridget69Bridget69about 18 years ago
Boating...

remains afloat with many stimulating scenarios. A story that makes you ride the waves of pleasure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love it, gave you a 5-

:)

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