All Comments on 'Body Shifters: C.L.A.I.R.E. Ch. 01'

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Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanabout 16 years ago
Quite interesting

Very well written. Certainly lots of sex. Only drawback is that there wasn't all that much setup, like back-story on Claire. Maybe we find out more, yes?

manyeyedhydramanyeyedhydraabout 16 years ago
Another Falls :)

And the Body Shifters continue to assimilate. I'm getting confused with all these stories popping up. It's an invasion. :) Nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Every scientist's dream

Really love your stories, esp. this one considering that I'm a science student with a bit of macrophilia. I wonder are you a scientist yourself?

centauri4centauri4over 15 years ago
Area 51 Representative

This story represents a breach of your national security compact. We will find you. There will be no additional sequels.

MESSAGE ENDS

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Interesting

Could have eased into the sex a bit more. Moving onto the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
lol well im sort of a nerd

so i understood most of what happened and it was cool i liked the story i give it a four

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Origin

What is the origin of these stories because it seems to be a combination of "Species" and "Decoys" except for the mitosis or splitting and genetic alteration

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

I really wish you would add more stories from this universe or expand with the 100 million story. They're great fun to read.

Monmusu_WriterMonmusu_Writeralmost 6 years ago
Incredibly sexy

I've started rereading your stories recently, and what leapt out to me is the way you've incorporated actual science into your stories in a way that's natural and doesn't detract from the eroticism at all. Still hoping you start writing again.

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 3 years ago
Intriguing

tale about an alien shapeshifter that could have escaped but refused to, and augmented the doctor's sexual endurance too.

Cute and charming in a different kind of way, without seeming too over-the-top. 5

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