All Comments on 'Body Shifters: C.L.A.I.R.E. Ch. 01'

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Comentarista82Comentarista82over 3 years ago
Intriguing

tale about an alien shapeshifter that could have escaped but refused to, and augmented the doctor's sexual endurance too.

Cute and charming in a different kind of way, without seeming too over-the-top. 5

Monmusu_WriterMonmusu_Writeralmost 6 years ago
Incredibly sexy

I've started rereading your stories recently, and what leapt out to me is the way you've incorporated actual science into your stories in a way that's natural and doesn't detract from the eroticism at all. Still hoping you start writing again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

I really wish you would add more stories from this universe or expand with the 100 million story. They're great fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Origin

What is the origin of these stories because it seems to be a combination of "Species" and "Decoys" except for the mitosis or splitting and genetic alteration

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
lol well im sort of a nerd

so i understood most of what happened and it was cool i liked the story i give it a four

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Interesting

Could have eased into the sex a bit more. Moving onto the rest.

centauri4centauri4over 15 years ago
Area 51 Representative

This story represents a breach of your national security compact. We will find you. There will be no additional sequels.

MESSAGE ENDS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Every scientist's dream

Really love your stories, esp. this one considering that I'm a science student with a bit of macrophilia. I wonder are you a scientist yourself?

manyeyedhydramanyeyedhydraabout 16 years ago
Another Falls :)

And the Body Shifters continue to assimilate. I'm getting confused with all these stories popping up. It's an invasion. :) Nicely done!

Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanabout 16 years ago
Quite interesting

Very well written. Certainly lots of sex. Only drawback is that there wasn't all that much setup, like back-story on Claire. Maybe we find out more, yes?

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