All Comments on 'Bonded and Bred Ch. 15-16'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

Good read

Chapter could be longer, to far apart.But I'm in love with this story.8FE1

Wolfkitty over 8 years ago

I don't know

James does not feel like Alpha material. He is kind of selfish. Can he really protect and take care of three or more women? Though Iris's pack is very small, it is very wealthy. It also has smart, young, talented women in it. Even the aunt is still young enough to bear healthy children. What lazy, bully of a male wolf wouldn't want to get his hands on Iris's pack and all it's riches, money and women? Will James be able or capable to step up to the plate?

Anonymousover 8 years ago

love this

please continue cant wait to read what happens next

elspethsheyna over 8 years ago

well written

This was really good can't wait for you to submit the next installment.

Thanks for a great read!!!!

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Update: September 15 2014. I have just submitted chapter one of a short story that I have written. It is called A Lady's Dilemma, and it will be a romance - eventually. It is a little bit of fun that I hope you will enjoy. I am currently self publishing some of my longer stor...

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