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Great story, but you use the word "some" too often. It might just be colloquial phrasing.

Not gonna lie I had to look up to see what colloquial meant. But yeah this was my first story I realize I used the word Some way too much. I think I tend to use it alot when I talk too. So I'll work on that.

Everything was good except the continued and over use of the word "some" which became distracting.

Yeah I know I overused the word Some, I already addressed that in a previous comment.

Holy shit... I'm so horny now

This made me so wet I had to mop it up a few time ;)