All Comments on 'Born Into Darkness Ch. 05'

Sophie knowing he isn't human should help Dean tell her everything about him.

This is a great story. I'm enjoying reading this, and can't wait to see what happens next. Glad you got an editor too. the first few chapters were understandably rough but this one was a great read. Keep up the awesome work. gave it 5 stars.

To my first Anon comment i want to say thank you and chapter six will be up no time. and to ariesgirl don't worry im getting to there in a bit, just you guys wait.

I enjoy the break from the real world, but don't have the skill to pen my own stories. I love to read other's work, and as the editor, it allows me to help you get your story as you want it, and minimize the negative comments. So you writers can keep posting! :-)

The only thing that sucks is, after editing a piece, I tend to disconnect the name of the piece, and the author's real name, from their pen names. So I open the story I edited a week before...

As I told you when I sent it back, great work!

And a comment on Ch. 6 for you readers... Its a good one! Dean makes progress with Sophie... ;-) Just a bit of a teaser.

Love your work, dude! Can't wait for the next chapter, which considering your track-record shouldn't be that far off!

Great story.

Awesome you should be published,,,,