All Comments on 'Bossy Bitch gets Taken'

by JustAnotherAmateurAuthor

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The_WatermanThe_Watermanalmost 6 years ago
OK, Yeah

Nicely done. I like how he just takes over and fucks her. Your story held together from beginning to end, and ended well. Good for you. Next story please. I hope you'll read mine and comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great First Piece!

I like how you made sure she wasn't too reluctant. Really liked it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot and Realistic!

Work flings are always one of the sexiest, mainly due to the fact we spend half a day with the coworkers.

I would love to see tables overturned.. Like Craig got a promotion in another project team etc.. And they both compete, causing sexual tension or something.

Anyways, this a great story and I hope to see more from u soon! 😊

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Just long enough!

It was a great length. Story line held throughout. No distracting grammatical errors. I’d read more about these two, or other characters you’d like to develop!

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