All Comments on 'Boudoir Models Ch. 01'

During the second shoot, you have Jennifer ask Krista whether her semi-nudity is as Jason wanted. Jason is Jennifer's husband, not Krista's. You meant Keith.

Nice opening, although the latter section - with Jennifer - seems a little rushed when compared to the amount of time we spend on Krista's sessions.<br>

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I'm hoping you won't simply have Todd blackmail the pair for sex, which would be pretty sleazy (and unlikely, given how much they appear to love their husbands). Rather, why not have him surprise them <i>in flagrante</i> and offer to take pix of the pair getting intimate? That way, they have fun and he gets to watch.

sounded like fun. but obviously your more into blackmail and therefore you should not put it into Exhibitionist & Voyeur nor in loving wifes. this already sound like NonConsent/Reluctance. this would be honest and not attracting people who give a shit about an author who thinks it erotic to destroy to familys with KIDS and finds it an additional sex-kick.

Jason - Keith - who cares about who is who, nit picken people on here are all pro's but you don't see there story in here.!! Very good story but I just don't want it turn into blackmail for a piece of ass from the owner because of there love for there husbands. It starts that way - I won't read the rest of the story or any future ones from you.! Thanks for a great story so far.! JAG/TSO

the entire story is like a junior high adventure story. Sorry!