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Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Got my motor running

A great story with a good plot and some strong descriptive writing. The author needs to establish at the beginning how the girl is tied up: As a reader I could not picture the scene as not enough information was there.

The story would also benefit the girl being given a name.

Other than that, a good read.

Recommended.

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