by Gentleyetwildguy
nice story but blew it at the end... if they are in public restroom why would she doze?????? lol... but nice writing style....
You seem to understand women well, nice style. I would like to see more stories. Kind of refreshing to see the women get hers and not the guy. However, it's always nice when both parties are satisfied. The romantic imaginative fantasy side of me loved the story, but the horny little slut in me wants to hear a little more about the dick. I feel like you are teasing me ;)
I loved how you mixed the soft and romantic bondage and with the woman's pleasure in the story. Great job!