by starfish9
gave a referral ............ nice very fucking nice......... and can not wait for the ongoing story.....
Best story I've read on lit in a good few months, really enjoyed it - was able to imagine i was there, being teased, tormented and finally given release!
Keep up the awesome work, and let me know when you have more for me to read! :)
Flash
wow... just wow... you've got me absolutely speechless. Please give me more!!!
I loved this story. It shows an understanding of real-life people, although it?s about the truest meaning of fantasy, and the throbbing organs don?t take over.
What a beautifully written story, full of juice and elegant delight
This story is fecking amazing. But then again i would say that as i think this woman is amazing
up til 3 am...again..reading this, and was well worth it...superb!
I found this story in the feedback portal. Loved it. Hope you write a part 2. Or a different story - I'd love to read anything else by you.
clarisa you should write more, a detailed and erotic story if only fantasies could come true...from andy a kindrid spirit
my man and i have been talking about the idea of me taking control in the bedroom, and after reading your story, I think I'm up for the challenge. It sounds sooo hot. I've read these kinds of stories before, but this one, coming from the woman's point of view, gave me a much better sense of what it is to be the 'mistress in the bedroom'
My man and I thank you. Delicious story!
Pure sex in the company of wonderful literacy. A pleasure!
You captured the second person narrative beautifully in this. Congratulations on a great story.
--- xxxotica (aka champagne1982)
The author herself asked me to read it. Im so glad it did. I have never read a story that made me feel like I was actually there. Well done
very beautiful and sensual story. wonderfully told, with emotion and so much feeling. incredibly hot!
It may have been written a while ago but this story is beautifully crafted. Well done.