by starfish9
It may have been written a while ago but this story is beautifully crafted. Well done.
very beautiful and sensual story. wonderfully told, with emotion and so much feeling. incredibly hot!
The author herself asked me to read it. Im so glad it did. I have never read a story that made me feel like I was actually there. Well done
Pure sex in the company of wonderful literacy. A pleasure!
You captured the second person narrative beautifully in this. Congratulations on a great story.
--- xxxotica (aka champagne1982)
my man and i have been talking about the idea of me taking control in the bedroom, and after reading your story, I think I'm up for the challenge. It sounds sooo hot. I've read these kinds of stories before, but this one, coming from the woman's point of view, gave me a much better sense of what it is to be the 'mistress in the bedroom'
My man and I thank you. Delicious story!
clarisa you should write more, a detailed and erotic story if only fantasies could come true...from andy a kindrid spirit
I found this story in the feedback portal. Loved it. Hope you write a part 2. Or a different story - I'd love to read anything else by you.
up til 3 am...again..reading this, and was well worth it...superb!
This story is fecking amazing. But then again i would say that as i think this woman is amazing
What a beautifully written story, full of juice and elegant delight
I loved this story. It shows an understanding of real-life people, although it?s about the truest meaning of fantasy, and the throbbing organs don?t take over.
wow... just wow... you've got me absolutely speechless. Please give me more!!!
Best story I've read on lit in a good few months, really enjoyed it - was able to imagine i was there, being teased, tormented and finally given release!
Keep up the awesome work, and let me know when you have more for me to read! :)
Flash
gave a referral ............ nice very fucking nice......... and can not wait for the ongoing story.....