by EroticKeys
Well written. Good strong POV's. Realistic characters. The subtle foreshadowing sprinkled throughout was deftly handled. There are lots of slow burn fans around here, so don't worry about that... . Welcome aboard.
Good begining. I can see a good direction here, hope it works out.
Please continue your tale. Its a great start, well writen. Nothing is better than building up a story with a strong plot and well developed characters. Don't rush the sex or the ending. Keep a good pace, your are starting out great.
You gave such detail descriptions of the medics, nurses and doctor that I suspect you have a medical background. Please continue. Would definitely like to learn more about Doogan and Julie!
Very, very nice start! I'm excited to see where you take this. Keep up the good work
~shysubmissivegirl~
Great premise. Easy to imagine how such accidental and casual event could morph into bdsm with specific kinks and hard limits "attached" hehe. Also, a future Dom that is not into sadism but into hedonism and nurturing is refreshing.