All Comments on 'Bound To Heal Ch. 01'

by EroticKeys

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Very nicely done.

Well written. Good strong POV's. Realistic characters. The subtle foreshadowing sprinkled throughout was deftly handled. There are lots of slow burn fans around here, so don't worry about that... . Welcome aboard.

CPack40CPack40over 10 years ago
Good Start

Good begining. I can see a good direction here, hope it works out.

redyellowgoredyellowgoover 10 years ago
Welcome to lit as a new author!

Please continue your tale. Its a great start, well writen. Nothing is better than building up a story with a strong plot and well developed characters. Don't rush the sex or the ending. Keep a good pace, your are starting out great.

inspector123inspector123over 10 years ago
Very good beginning ....

You gave such detail descriptions of the medics, nurses and doctor that I suspect you have a medical background. Please continue. Would definitely like to learn more about Doogan and Julie!

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

Love this great for your first.can't wait for more

shysubmissivegirlshysubmissivegirlover 10 years ago

Very, very nice start! I'm excited to see where you take this. Keep up the good work

~shysubmissivegirl~

MastersWenchMastersWenchover 9 years ago
Great Start!

Oh I love this start to your story!

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years ago

Great premise. Easy to imagine how such accidental and casual event could morph into bdsm with specific kinks and hard limits "attached" hehe. Also, a future Dom that is not into sadism but into hedonism and nurturing is refreshing.

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