All Comments on 'Bound To Heal Ch. 03'

Aunt Nancy. Creeps. Me. Out. I suppose she's supposed to be helping Julie free herself from her mental and emotions bonds, but she comes across as a skeevy molester. And there was just too much of her.

It is interesting to experience Doogan learning with Stacy, but it doesn't seem he has much to learn. I'm a fan of slow burn, but generally between the lead characters. Unless you are planning polyamory here and I can't see Julie going for that.

I liked what I thought the story was going to be- Doogan and Julie- now I'm just feeling impatient.

with doogan and stacy doing the d/s thing i am wanting them to stay together. having julie come into the mix after him working so hard to gain stacys trust just to leave her for julie would be fucked up and make her seem like an outsider. given her mental state right now it seems like a bad thing for her to go into a bdsm lifestyle.

Good story so far. A nice couple of plot twists to sort out and persue. Although I will agree with the other two comments, Doogan and Stacy seem to have a good thing going, tossing Julie into that mix does not look good, but there are ways to make that work. Also i would agree about Aunt Nancy. Her character seems a bit much for Julie. Although, as a catalast, she could be the one to push, pull or drag Julie kicking and sreaming from her sheltered life.

So we will only know when the author bestowes upon us mere readers the rest of the story.

We eargly await the next chapter.

I am enjoying this story very much. Plots and sub-plots make for interesting reading. I am keen to know how this is going to play out.

When I started the story I thought it was going to be Julie and Doogan but now I think it should stay Doogan and Stacy. Maybe a friend of Doogan could be introduced to Julie. Don't really want to see the three of them together. Stacy really needs the special treatment after her ex boy friends treatment.

Thank you readers. Wow, I am humbled by all your comments and your voting. I can't believe I've got 2 HOTS in three chapters for a first story. I'm glad the plot twists are keeping everyone on edge. (LOL) If I said 'trust me, things will work out ok', would you consider it a spoiler or delusional ramblings from a senior? Ch-06-Halloween will reveal something interesting about Nancy. Again thank you for the interest. Other chapters to follow shortly. -- EK.

If I could give it 10, I would. Superb, romantic, erotic. Well-written with great grammar, spelling, and composition to top it all off. Keep writing this stuff. I'm putting you on my favourites list so I can check back from time to time to see if you've posted anything newer (than Ch. 04 which I have to read next).