by SpotInTheSand
A great story, SITS. Your characters are alive and breathing to me, real people, which is the sign of a great author. Oh, and the sex is hot, too.
On to the next chapter.
I hope the unnecessary criticisms don't get to you. The rest of us know why we keep coming back. 10/10
But goddamn that chapter was hot.
Some authors on here write in a world without STDs. It works for them, and I enjoy their writing. Brad, while getting more sex than a lot of men get even in their fantasies, lives in a universe based on reality, where thugs like pregnancy and syphilis do exist. I'm sorry the condoms ruined it for you. There are many, many authors here who don't use them (at least in their writing).
this is fantasy, not a condom commercial. therefore, ruined it for me. i have only read 2 chapters. assume all your work is like this.
Hey, Spot, great story, but, man, it's been going on two years! AND nine months ago you promised your fans something would be up soon.
You either are dead, or you don't care much about your readers. Not good.
I am, and I'm sure many others are eager to see what happens between Brad and Kelly.
Gary
that was so damn fucking hot!! took me forever to read because i kept going back & rereading...the 69 & the wall fuck!!! UNNFF!!
Have you forgotten about this story?? I hope you are still planning to continue it...it's a great series.
I cannot wait to read the next installments. I'm almost completely rendered speechless.
Great writing, great storyline, but at the pace you're publishing, it'll be 2012 by the time he gets home.
This chapter was well worth the wait! But... I really hope the wait isn't this long for the next one!
Oh my GOD!!...which is exactly what I screamed when I was cumming. This was sooo hot! I will have to go back and read the first 5 installments and have some more fun playing with my pussy. I can't wait!
Well worth the read. I hope the episodes come closer together now. You're on a roll. One of the hottest on this site.