All Comments on 'Brad's Seduction of Michelle'

I really liked you story. Please do not let it be your only one.

Good enough! Keep writing.

You made Joe too much of an idiot for my tastes. You want us to believe he didn't know what was happening right in front of his face. Not good.

But the real issue i have is you making Joe to be some moron. Youre telling us he would be furious that she fucked Brad before they were dating? WHO THE FUCK CARES?!? But you also want us to believe that Brad fucked her in front of Joe and neither of them noticed?

Go peddle your crazy somewhere else.

Kinda harsh folks! Yes Joe is a moron who trusts his friend. But still very hot story. Just relax and enjoy the story, if you don't like it ok don't read anymore of the guys stuff. But by far no where near a bad story.

This was well written and the Way you worded their Love making threw me off, in a good way!! Keep making Quality shit like this and I'll keep cumming to it!! Elaborate on wether she's on Birth Control or not and possibly Dick Size! I liked the way it left it to the imagination and didn't have Taboo, but Taboo, is Sexy!

Great story. How long for the next chapter ?

It's garden variety noncon, where the victim gives into her lust. Not seduction.

I enjoyed it. Good build up and good sex. Are you going to be doing any more writing?