All Comments on 'Brandi and Kelly Ch. 11'

Finally a new chapter, thanks for that. Please be faster with the next one. ;-)

Only the best stories include revenge, keep it up!

I wonder where it will lead Brandi and Kelly now. I really liked the ponygirl parts of the story. Please keep going.

Teacher is Mistaken is taking up all my time at the moment, and work, but that's not important. Will let Brandi have her revenge and see what she decides to do next. She will probably take an interest in Kelly, watching her go through her paces as a pony girl. Just now thinking of a plot where Brandi becomes a pony girl, harnessed up to a carriage with Kelly. Will she be able to withstand the harsh training? Or could she lose her will to fight it this time?

Hmm, I think going with her fried as a ponygirl would be great. Or as a pet again, an obedient, little puppygirl maybe...

I didn't think Big John would train her as a pony against her will. At least it seemed so of what could be read about him, he rescued Brandi repeatedly...

Hope you're getting on well with the next part of this great series. And can post it soon...

that Brandi was a switch, and her and michelle Slut would be, great combination The Story of Mistress Brandi and michelle Slut would be a nice couple of chapters

Have to agree johns character the first weekend is completely out of line with kelly

hi,

i would love to see this story continued.

perhaps brandi could get pony training but later discovers she likes driving brandi? and perhaps they can take part in races or show-events?

regards

Thank you for the way you allowed Brandi to go on with life n have Big John always to look out for her.

I read the entire series n felt like i new Brandi.

Her worry towards her family n dignity was heartfelt n I felt great caring n concern towards Brandi, because her family would have known something was wrong n be looking for her.

I hated Kevin n way he tricked her with total disreguard for her n her feelings.

I always had thought like her that since she was new to it all, she could say NO or a pass word would be given n honored, for him to stop.

Any way tho, as it turned out all of them who hurt her:

Kevin, Thomas, Cindy, Teressa, and Janet got what they deservred from Big John.

Hope you add more to this one even tho it seems over... her life goes on with Michael Slut...

Be nice have you have us drop in n see update on how they are from time to time.

Just sayin'

Was enjoying the story till her "best friend" betrayed her. I'm into BDSM but it should always be consensual. No thanks

Very riveting story. Disturbing peek at the gullibility of young women who think they are so sophisticated. Btw, it's "throes", not "throws".

Thanks for not having a totally depressing ending

Too bad this tale never got continued.