All Comments on 'Brave Hard Ch. 01'

by mosprophetic

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cherriejamcherriejamover 13 years ago
Interesting

Doing good, can't wait for the second part, but you may want to consider gaining the assistance of an editor, just a friendly suggestion.

boy1der007boy1der007over 13 years ago
good start...

good start ...keep it going

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 13 years ago
Well, did the dad blash his brains in or not?

Curious minds want to know.

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