All Comments on 'Breaking Drake Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

i feel like drake should be a little more depressed than he is now more angry and Maby Raell having some qualm realizing she was being to hard or tough

id seriously expect that at this point drake tried to kill himself atleast once even thou its not possible or being completely meloncholy with everything showing no emotion just sort of acting like a shell i get all the slaves are suppost to see the things drake has and his experiance is not particulary special (yet!) but Raell should have some form of empathy especially after seeing drake broken in someway

p.s love this series best i have seen on litorotica by far keep it up!!

hikecrazehikecrazeabout 9 years ago
i agree

this is a great story on here....and one of the better ive read but 14 chapters in and not one female scenario except for a description of being female and some descriptions of her build and boots.....and we have the male protagonist not lusting after his mistress or the female in power in the last seen but wanting to be sodomized...again.....im confused is he a miscast, or a male learning that he prefers males in ways he never knew.....i mean on the one hand he is discussed at touching a male intimately yet he is desiring to be penetrated by a male organ..... i'm as ever loving the story but the idea of having a dom sub relationship between a male and a female and only desiring male on male/simulated male leaves me wondering how the female gets her jollys off physicly....i mean i can see the emotional jollys all day long but at some point (unless she isnt a she) we gotta want to see how the other half lives, so to speak lol...sorry for the rant and keep it up.

SonomaAlSonomaAlalmost 9 years ago

Like the slave being fucked but it was too short. Could have lasted longer. Maybe sucking the dildo before have it put in him.

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