All Comments on 'Breath of Fresh Air Ch. 03'

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<3 it!

More more more!!!! I love the chemistry between katie n mike!! Good job. Hope u post more soooon!!!!

I'm in total agreement with the below comments! Your writing is so perfect it makes me feel a little guilty I'm not paying for it! :) Keep up the great work and don't leave me waiting too long for the next chapter.

PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...why do they always end so soon?!

(we are so greedy :) )

I periodically stop by your page to check for updates. When I did so tonight I wasn't expecting anything. So when I saw the new chapter I squealed in delight! This was great!! I love how you had Mike reflect on why going after Katie is so important, that there's something more with her.

Amazing story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

You've totally reeled me in with these two. I can't wait to see where you go with them. Fantastic first steps (or first 3 steps!)

Keep it up!

I love, love, love your story! I'm checking every day for a new chapter, pleeeaaase submit one soon!

I love what you added. It really helped round off the chapter. ^_^

Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!

I keep checking back, day after day, waiting for the next chapter.....please post soon!

Love the story.

You gave the story a more substantial feel.

Thanks for the cue to reread it at the beginning of Chapter 4.

Been waiting for chapter 5 for so long!!!!

It's getting juicy n hott but it's freaking bed time for me! I'm loving this story my kinda romance ;-)

Love the "the soft weight of his erection dragging below." Damn, was that hot.

Please NEVER stop writing these sexy romance/drama stories.

Thank you,

- Everybody.

one of the best sex scenes on the net

Loved it--the humor, the drama, the surprises, and of course, the sex. Mike and Katie are obviously made for each other. I really want to learn how their love escalates.

I'm really enjoying your story. All the time the girls are reading romance novels, are they like this story. I'm late to your game but glad I came.

He leaned back so he could watch, fascinated, as she flew apart in his arms.

Once Katie feels his heat why so shy you cum beautifully. Striping her was so much fun after her first O I had to pause for a cigarette.

Pushing 80 and have only had sex with 2 women. The first wife it was basic sex. The second wife was love and the sex was, well it was more than sex sort of like the couple in this story. It really makes a difference, what else can I say? Very good writing and a very warm erotic love scene. And the story goes on...............