All Comments on 'Bree's New Life'

by notsoliteral

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
?

Why

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
GOD DAMNITT YOU'VE STILL GOT TEETH. WAIT UNTIL SOMEONE IMPORTANT(LIKE THE BOSS

STICKS IT IN YOUR MOUTH AND BITE IT OFF). USE HIS CELL PHONE, GUN? WHILE HE IS IN PAIN...DON'T KILL HIM ...SHOOT HIM IN THE KNEES THEN RUIN HIS FACE..GIVE HIM SOMETHING TO REMEMBER YOU BY.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Cool story

Had me horny from the start XD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Average.

Nott an overly great start to the story with contradicting things being said. She is a virgin with a boob job? Then a virgin that says she has always loved sex and fantasied about being a prostitute? So that made no sense to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Hot!

AmbulAmbul5 months ago

Bree obviously likes sex and all her gym work and her enhanced 34D tits confirm that she loves to show off her fabulous, toned and tanned body. No mention, though, of birth control. As a whore, her owner would want her on birth control unless he has other plans for her. The story is moving very quickly, and a little more buildup would allow the reader to savor the erotic scenes more. I look forward to more.

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