All Comments on 'Brenda Is Exposed'

development,short

Well written.

From prude to submissive, unbuttoning blouse to fucking hubbies buddies... Bit too much for the time frame given.

I hate creepy assholes like this guy. Hope he chokes on pretzel and gets hit with a bar glass! Creepy fucking pervert!

So just like that she is a slut, everybody has pictures and is laughing at you but this is good. No worrys about pg or std cause this is a fantasy, just not mine,-5! You are a punk.

Was it too big a change, too fast? The premise seemed to be that see was dominant when she could be, but had no middle ground. If she found herself to be out-dominated, she became totally submissive. Once there, she found that she enjoyed the sensuality she had been suppressing with her domination-self!

Not sure if that premise actually obtains in many people, but this IS fiction, and the author set that as the stage.

4*

Totally preposterous. You don't change from prude to slut that fast. Also the asshole husband would never subject his wife to this treatment. Just a sick fantasy.

"betrayedbylove"

And I don't think the wife (or anyone else for that matter) would make those changes that quickly. And next time either get a proof reader or an editor because the grammar errors made this nearly unreadable.

Bad storyline to me, but it's not my story. Thanks for the read.

Not sure what everyone was getting upset with. It's just a story. It was a fun story. Maybe it would have been nice to have taken a little longer to get her to where it ended, but I liked it.

Author must have had head injury. No other possible explanation for this.