All Comments on 'Bridesmaids Are Easy'

But you do need to find an editor or proof read the story more times. Spelling and grammar did interfere with the reading.

I proofread for a minimal fee or free if you can't afford it. Not to be critical but you had more words spelled wrong and punctuation that was "off" in this one than you have many others.

What a great story! Really filthy dialogue. I loved it!

But quickly lost interest with all the typo's, wrong word usage ("lose" vs "loose", etc.) and other poor grammar. Please find a good editor or proof-reader! No rating from me.

...Your nickname is something you're officially called, rather it's another name so if you're not normally called "Steven", then that IS your nickname.

I liked the story a great deal, but it would be a lot more fun to read if you read proof on it, corrected your spelling mistakes, corrected your punctuation mistakes, and made sure the words you broke apart were restored.

Looking forward to Part 2.