Bridget the Bossy Bridezilla

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Ben, enormously relieved that Janos was talking about the project would normally have said that he was engaged and getting married soon, but tonight said, "No, I'm not married."

"Plenty of time for you to find nice girl to marry," said Janos. "You probably want to get home, but would it be okay for me to have quick look at plans?"

"Okay," said Ben, as he Janos and Tracy stood for a few minutes discussing the guest house plans before Ben bade them goodnight and drove back towards Brisbane. Stopped at a set of traffic lights in Southport, Ben could not believe what he had done. He had cheated on Bridget with a client and tried telling himself he should feel guilty.

But while Ben did feel some guilt, he was not overwhelmed with guilt the way he imagined he would had somebody put the evening's events to him as a hypothetical several weeks earlier. Driving through the intersection as the light turned green, Ben pondered what Bridget had gotten up to after their fight earlier in the evening, and what to about his troublesome fiancée in the longer term.

Breaking off the engagement would seem to be the most sensible course of action, but Ben knew he would never find the courage to do that. Bridget's barrister father would help his daughter make Ben's life a living hell. And Ben did not want his life to be hell. And now he had one thing over Bridget - the knowledge of what he had done with Tracy, not that he ever intended telling Bridget about it. So now when Bridget was bossy, bitchy, selfish or controlling, Ben had the knowledge that he had screwed Tracy and it gave him satisfaction that he had done something she had no control over, and a kind of inner strength.

Turning onto the freeway that would take him back to Brisbane and his bad-tempered bitch of a bride-to-be, Ben hoped his next meeting with Tracy went just as well.

*

At the Kovich house, Janos and Tracy had gone back inside, Tracy remarking to her husband, "Your daughter is home."

Janos laughed. "What you mean is my daughter? You give birth to her, I drive you to hospital, I remember."

"Speaking of driving, where's your car?" Tracy asked.

"I leave in secure car park, we have few beers after meeting, did not want trouble with police," said Janos.

"How was your meeting?" Tracy asked.

"Good, it was with legal firm in Brisbane we use," said Janos. "The barrister, he in good mood, buy everyone drinks. He talk about his daughter, she has good job as dentist and is getting married in two weeks to nice guy. He very proud."

"I wish I was as proud of our daughter," said Tracy.

"Why she want to go out with losers and listen to awful music?" grumbled Janos. "What they call, it grunge?"

"Yeah, grunge," said Tracy. "I could think of better terms for it. Shit, crap, excrement, dung, manure ..."

Her husband shook his head. "Grunge, the music kids listen to today, it load of bloody bullshit. If I make grunge music, I would get gun and kill myself."

Janos and Tracy turned as their daughter entered, having removed her earphones but dressed as usual in crappy grunge clothes - an oversize check-shirt and jean shorts over black tights that looked like they had come from a charity bin. The teenager chewed gum, her long brown hair hanging loose.

"So Casey, what great things have you achieved today?" Tracy asked her daughter in a voice dripping with sarcasm.

THE END.

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Probus888Probus888almost 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this story, so well written and with humor, especially with younger brother Craig. And a twist to the ending as well. Can't believe that poor Ben is still marrying Bridget - don't do it!

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Nicely told, great character development! Ben still marrying Bridget? Poor guy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I knew it was Casey!

Would love to see Ben and Casey have their own steamy session. That's an ultimate betrayal to loser Craig. I also want to see Ben having an affair with Caroline. Cheating on his fiancee with her sister is HOT!

I'm pretty sure Tracy fantasizes about her own son.

RetroFanRetroFanabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks Regrets

Hi Regrets - I'm pleased you liked this story so much. I really enjoyed writing it, especially Ben's loser brother Craig.

RetroFan

RegretsRegretsabout 4 years ago
Wonderful story. So much care has been taken. A real pleasure to read

I loved Bridget’s wild abandon with his brother and how he was given all the access that Ben will never get. I do hope that he comes to his senses, but when I was younger I watched many young men get married to the obviously wrong girl. When you are young there is a time when there is a constant trail of people getting married and you do see some amazing couplings. I loved the loose ends....just what is the extent of Bridget’s relationship to Daddy? If the marriage takes place will there be a secret supply of losers who she allows to fuck her... and Ben never gets to find out, yet she often has him sleep on the sofa and runs him ragged, while he constantly tries to search for the fix. Let us hope that his experiences at the client’s house brings him to his senses. Or, would we prefer to have his subsequent misfortune played out for us? This is as good a story as can be found anywhere on Literotica and I recommend that readers take it to their hearts and spread the news of a great writer.

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