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Anonymousabout 7 years agoIt's not bad, but it certainly isn't great. A little more character description is needed, maybe some more setup, and some pacing fixes. Understandable for a first story though.
irishcream44almost 7 years agoGot tired
Trying to read 1st paragraph and seperate thoughts was tiring enough I didn't continue
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Howdy, just here to write some goofy fun stories, that's about it really.
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