All Comments on 'Brody & Michelle Ch. 01'

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QuestioningLitQuestioningLitover 8 years ago
Cynical

I kind of like cynical guys. Especially in stories. It is extremely tiring that the MC guy in most of these stories are either way too extremely nice or just an absolute putz. This makes a nice change of pace and I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Unexpected yet very intriguing

A rather unusual choice of main character for a romance yet it gives him a certain flair that makes it so very intriguing. Michelle doesn't seem the usual kind girl as knows her own value so this should be a really fun ride to observe. The sow pace only makes it better so in that regard I have noting to add. Hope to see a continuation soon.

SAV12SAV12almost 5 years ago
SO FAR SO GOOD

KEEP IT COMING. IT'S A NICE STORY SO FAR. I'M INTERESTED.

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