All Comments on 'Broken'

I enjoyed this very much and thought it was literate and well thought out, bringing to an erotic story more than a lot of authors manage.

I notice this is your first submission in quite a long time, but you still have what it takes to tell a story well.

I look forward to reading more of your work - thank you for sharing it with us.

Very good writing. the build ups to intensity were great and left us very excited. Would love to hear more. Excellent

But the husband will discover the marks left by the rough play... Then "daddy" will meet some unpleasant repercussions. Assholes who play in other guys sandbox deserve the shitstorm they get.

very enjoyable Read and can see how you would and could experience it. would like to see you finish this story line Imp

extremely intense & focused story

really very good

Yeah who cares about the children and husband... they say the world needs ditch diggers.. well I guess one could also say that "the world could always use more pig women"