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Linda went back into the garage. Her frantic pace was causing the flip-flops to make a lot of noise as she walked. She cautiously headed for the door into the house and turned the door know quietly. She could hear the voices of the four people out on the patio by the pool. She listened for Ben's voice and heard him talking outside too. Good, the house should be clear. She slipped her flip-flops from her feet inside the mudroom and started to walk quietly over to the cupboard that held the car keys. The door opened without a sound as she carefully checks the various key rings on the hooks. She found single key on a fob from the Ford dealership that looked pretty new. She guessed that maybe it was for his F-150. She carefully lifted if from its hook and clasped her hand around it. Once she had closed the cupboard door she snuck back out to the garage, out the service door and around to the driveway.
She crept up to his truck. The door was unlocked so she carefully opened it. The dome light seemed bright in the dimly lit yard so she quickly climbed in onto the seat and closed the door gently, to kill the lights but unfortunately, they remained on for what seemed like an eternity. She tried the key in the ignition lock. It slid in easily so she was pretty sure it was for this truck but it could have been from another Ford. It was decision time; either go for it or get the heck back to the horse barn and try to deal with the broken hinge. The lights faded to black in the cab. She sat up in the driver's seat, desperately trying to make up her mind. Was she ready? Which way should she go once she started this thing in motion. How far could she get before he heard the truck running?
Suddenly her shaking right hand turned the key and the engine started. The headlights automatically turned on too. She fiddled with the control and finally got them to turn off. The engine didn't sound too loud to her but she knew it was time to leave. She pulled the shifter down into reverse and turned around to back up to a spot where she could turn around. She just let the engine idle to keep the noise to a minimum. Maybe the conversation in the back would be enough to cover the sound of the truck as it pulled back. She stopped, shifted into drive and as on her way away from the house. She gained speed gently as she headed down what looked like a driveway. Then again, everything that wasn't a cactus of bush of some kind looked like a driveway. She turned the headlights back on for better vision. They almost made things worse because the sand directly in front of her looked more road-like than the non-illuminated sand on either side. She checked her rear view mirror. A light had been turned on in front of the house, or was that on before? She saw the compass on the rear view mirror reading "SW." She veered a little to the left until it read "S." Her plan was to keep going in one direction until she came upon a paved road. The fuel gauge was just over half-full. She hoped it would be enough.
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Thank you all for reading my story. I especially enjoy hearing from you. I hope you enjoy the story.
- COMMENTS
bashful4u22over 7 years agoPlease telling me when you will be writing more of this story.
I would love to know more about you. I think I'm in lust with your mind.
Traci from NC
Anonymousabout 8 years agoAnything can be a weapon.
She’s in a truck, she has the key.
Don’t try to escape, drive it in front of the house and honk.
When the raping bastard comes out, slam the accelerator and turn him to grape jelly smeared all over the front of his house.
Running is the wrong strategy. Killing the abuser ends the threat.
She’s been on TV. Once the Cops come they’ll recognize her and believe her story.
CUSpacecowboyalmost 9 years agoI still can't tell if I like this story or not, not because of the subject matter but because Ben is such a sucky character, he acts like a 16 year old that was given a woman to do with what he wants and he's trying to look like a man and act tough but he's still a 16 year old with no experience.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoNo, no, no, previous 2 commenters, this story NEEDS to end with Sarah ("Linda's" REAL name) getting away safely! ESPECIALLY since she has friends/family that care about and are looking for her!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI understand this is your story and while I am liking it... I find that for my persoonal taste I enjoy this type of story when a more emotional connection is made between the two main characters. Also in the beginning of the story he seems like a nice guy who isnt sure of himself and it set up the story like they might grow attached to eachother and learn many things together .. like maybe he got a slave because his famtasies are dark and twisted and hes scared other women away or too afraid to even bring it up.. then he gets her and unbeknownst to her shes super turned on by hus sadistic behavior.. I feel like youve tapped your toe in that story line but then suddenly changed its direction or at least the characters personalities which in part I like because it left me guessing but it felt somewhat forced. I do like this story and the way you are switching it up but I guess as an avid reader on the site im used to getting more of a feel for the characters and usually I like the male antagonist even if hes a jerk. Maybe you dont like the cliché, asshole slave buyer falls for slave girl and opens up to her and they fall in love and have babies.... I am... yeah im a sap lol... that could be why him bringing inhis old gf or hook up threw me off and made me not like him.... I want to like him but he seems so idk how to word it but I just dont understand him not in a mysterious way just in a what the heck way... I wish he could show affection for her more than just suck my dick while I date other chicks and oh btw clean my house... I really hope somehow maybe her leaving him whether she gets away or not makes him somehow realize something one way or another... maybe he gets her back from the tracking device and punishes her severely goes overboard and hurts her and then he sees how scared her leaving made him not just for getting caught but losing her.... or maybe if he really just wants a sex slave idk.. it just feels too emotionless for me I domt like that im rooting for her to eescape usually I am like nooooo hes so hot and sexy go back but now im like really he makes her shovel horse shit and sleep in it while he gets his rocks off with some old fling... ohh please address the sterile issue please please pleaseeee tell me shes not actually sterile! Ohh another possible situation... maybe her operation went bad and she winds up getting pregnant with his baby and months after she escapes and returms home he is never found but she realizes shes pregnant and wont give up her baby and he tracks her down and shit gets intense... he kidnaps her back and ... okay I know I have given way too much of my opinion hahaha im sorry you are great please keep writing ill keep reading :) ps my tablet is hard to type on so if my spelling is atrocious and punctuation sucks its partly because my keyboard and also im a lazy writer... hence why im commenting my advice not writing stories haha...
