All Comments on 'Broken In Ch. 02'

This is great :)

But needs editing. There are numerous sentences that just don't make sense...It's like there are words missing from them or something. This detracts a little from the overall quality. Other than that -- 5 stars!

wish i was used like jerod,, by a group of Big Ds

Explicit and erotic. I'd love to be "used" like this too

I don't get the whining about "racist" here. Both of the characters are stereotypes, it's a hot fantasy, and not something to get all offended about.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how Darnell pushes things even further.

Lucky Bottom........

I get the D&S stereotypes but hate the underlying vibe of this story. These two are supposed to be be close friends but Darnell is a sneaky, manipulative, dishonest DL gay man who admittedly rapes his “friend” and completely messes with his head in the process. That’s just messed up on so many levels. It presents Darnell as a selfish, lying asshole and Jay as a naive, stupid, doormat.