All Comments on 'Broken Vows Ch. 5'

by SteamyChik

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Nicola_Italia1Nicola_Italia1almost 20 years ago
Yummy

I LOVE her writing! Totally descriptive and creamy.

samwise24601samwise24601almost 20 years ago
more, more, more

I eagerly await more of this story. Please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved it!!

You have a very nice talent in writing erotic stories! I love this story so much. I read it over and over and it NEVER fails to get me hot and wet!! Thanks and hope to see more wonderful stories from you soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More

Please tell me there will be more of this story. Don't leave everyone hanging

CherelleannaCherelleannaover 13 years ago
Fantastic!

I love the series, very well written, and the story drags you in. Will you be writing more for it?

phil2213phil2213over 11 years ago
trash

This grouping of words is a total waste of space time and energy for the author and reader. It is not a fantasy or a story. Please try another endeavour since writing is not an achievable reality for you. The effort is not appreciable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A bit over the top...

You're a great writer... i read with a perverted curiosity about where the story was going next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
best series ever....

Please ignore phils comment. He must be jealous

merrySMmerrySMabout 9 years ago
more please...

Nice use of religion, uncle, non consent...can't wait to read more.

RamielionRamielionalmost 9 years ago
awesome but

Such a shame this will never finish...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wet, hot, creamy words of yum

Steamy, if you are still out there somewhere PLEASE finish this story! I couldnt breath and im so wet. Where in the world is Steamy?

JadetatsuJadetatsuover 7 years ago
too wordy

you took to long to get to the sex part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Does she ever get back?? I love the series!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Where chapter 6.plz post chapter 6

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The story was fantastic and aroused me greatly. Unfortunately, here I am horny and there's no follow-up chapter to excite me even further. Steamy, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More? This is getting good!

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

Kind of reinforces my feelings concerning the Catholic church . . . .

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