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by GideonLee

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Continuity?? Proof Reading??

"... Brooklyn walked over to the bathroom, still wearing nothing more than her shirt and panties. "

"... Also, why aren't you wearing pants?"

Since all she'd done in between was to prepare to brush her teeth, where did her pants go??

GideonLeeGideonLeeabout 10 years agoAuthor
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She was in the process of changing and hadn't put any on yet.

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