All Comments on 'Brother Wolves Ch. 01'

I'm glad you are posting this here.2d8

this chapter was super boring!

I loved this chapter it was pretty good, for a first part. Can't wait for to read more and find out about the dragon's. Is there going to be a separate story for their brothers as well?

I don't get it, is it a sequel of something?

I love the story, I'm only confused about one thing. Do the dragon brothers share a mate, or each has a mate ? I hope that it is each has their own, otherwise it's kinda weird even for weres.

Everyone needs to read dark where first,it is a sequel to that serie

Werewolf and indians,Dark were it is a sequel to these series.

Congratulations Ireadtorelax

I can't wait to read more, but on the first page two paragraphs are really hard to read. I wonder if the formatting got screwed up. I just wanted to let you know, because normally there are not major editing issues with your stories. I'm excited for the next part.

Only one critique. the grammar and editing is a little below your usual standard. Love the story line and hope to see it grow. Thanks for all the hard work.

Where was your editor? Who proofed?

I had to stop reading on the first page.

Were wolves with vampires, were wolves with Indians, and now were wolves with dragons. Your stories sure cover a broad spectrum and keep me coming back for more!

Just needs an editor.

I would have rated higher except that I found it hard to follow all the new people .Maybe it is just me ,I am not perfect either. I can't wait to continue .

You have a good plot but all the new people we don't know suddenly being thrown into the mix with no info as to their role is confusing.

What happened? As soon as the story comes to the present it just falls apart. The prolog was great, then it's like you forgot how to type or speak english

You have a great story to tell. The abundant spelling and grammar errors are a distraction....

5 stars only because the beginning touched me and it was written well. You lost me in the 'Present', to many unfimiliar characters, you were dropping names like we knew who they were, but i can live with the grammer and spelling errors nothing a good editor can't fix. Don't rush slow down and let the story line unfold naturally to do it justice...

I like your stories, but this was unreadable in places. There were six errors in one short paragraph. Please, get a new editor.