All Comments on 'Brotherly Love'

by ericthefreak

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Lousy?

Yes if I feel kindly today

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
stupid

the first part about the jeep had nothing to do with the story it was just wasted space and then he has sex with her while she is passed out which is rape since she could not give or deny permission all in all a real stupid and sick story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Stop writing (if that's what you call this) please

This is a poorly done story. You obviously didn't want to take time to think a story out so you threw this together and submitted it unfortunately. The pieces don't fit together and the process of buying a car to having "sex" with sister is too fast and not thought out. For everyone's sake. please don't submit anything else.

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